Ailam Remard

Write more! Dangit more! This is really good! Gah Jared! I wish I could write as AWESOME as you :). -Ailam

Hmmm. I like it better but I still think it could use some improving.

CUTE! I love Twilight. I love how Alice and Jasper's thoughts were. It's so sad about jacob though, I really would pick him over Edward.

I really don't know what I intend to do with it. Sometimes I just get inspired and write down something that I have no idea what to do with. This ...

yes, i know. my writing really sucks. i just post it on here because, well really i don't know why i post it on here.....

i hope this isn't YOUR suicide letter cuz you're too cool and i'm sure everyone would miss you a lot :) -ailam

:( sad! But you know what's funny? I was writing a poem where the main line was "So long ago". Lol

I didn't quite get it. Like was the plane crashing, was he talking about killing himslef, or just being really depressing??

I used to feel like that about a boy. His name was Keegan, and even though we carpooled together to choir, he never even knew I was alive.

Is this real or not because it is posted under "Other". ?? If it is I'm sorry.

Reading this is sort of depressing Jared!

Bradford really made you guys do that in health class? That's retarded! That's why Bailey is cool. Peace! -Ailam

Uh..... Um..... by doing what you say, my poem is pretty much gone. I wrote it the way I did for a reason, yeah, every line means something to me. ...

Oh my. I think you just put my exact feelings into a poem about my breakup.

She needs to be changed to she's in many sentences. Not very proper english. I myself wasn't a fan. I'm sorry.